Evaluation Task 9

Evaluation Task 9: Director's Commentary

Below is our director's commentary for Return of Kezia.

Evaluation Task 8

Evaluation Task 8: Our Improvements for G324:

Even though I thought that our G321 Film opening was successful and was an effective horror film opening, there are several aspects of our filmmaking that we need to improve for next year.

Mise en Scene:

One way in which we can improve for next year is mise en scene. For this we can make our costumes clearer so our audience will find it easier to identify with our characters by seeing if they are a protagonist or antagonist. I feel that because all of our characters wore similar costumes, the audience could have found

Camera:
A target that we have set ourselves as a group for G324 next year is to include a wider range of camera angles. This can enable us to get higher marks for our trailer next year. I feel that we should film scenes more than once as it will give us more choice and have more likeliness of picking the right scene for the trailer.

Editing:
To improve our editing for next year, we need to add a larger variety of cuts between separate scenes, as well as making sure that all cuts are smooth. This will make sure that our film will be easier to watch for our target audience.

Sound:
We can improve our sound for our trailer next year by making sure that our dialogue is clear. This will make sure that our audience can clearly understand what we are saying when we are filming. I feel that we could also add more non diegetic music to our piece, as it adds and intensifies the emotions in the scene.